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<a href="http://www.daemonprojects.com/test1/" target="_blank">http://www.daemonprojects.com/test1/</a>
Thanx
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You need more Idea ??
I have some simple Land mins wating to be made.
Rest of the stuff Is for more WorLike enviromant when real armys are fighting :D
Hi there, I've been proof reading your site and have found the following errors:
1. will is consistantly mis-spelled as well;
2. 1st sentance, 1st paragraph, s/b can shoot up to or further;
3. 2nd sentence, 1st paragraph, s/b spray not spry, repeated later in same paragraph x2;
4. 6th sentence, 1st paragrah loose s/b lose;
5. 2nd paragraph, theirs s/b there's;
7. Potato Gun Diagram:
a) Cupling s/b Coupling;
b) cutt s/b cut;
c) text box, 1st line too many 'make' there my friend!
d) somthing s/b something;
e) seriously has one r;
8. 1st caption on tazer diagram, victom s/b victim;
9. 3rd caption on tazer diagram safty s/b safety;
10. 3rd caption on tazer diagram shoke s/b shock;
11. 4th caption on tazer diagram tellsyou s/b tells you;
12. key for wiring, purple, bults s/b bolts.
I hope this is of help, i have trouble with spelling and grammer but I believe all corrections are right and are in British English.
(I hope you are not offended)
Tubs xXx
[quote]Originally posted by Tubs:
<strong>Hi there, I've been proof reading your site and have found the following errors:
1. will is consistantly mis-spelled as well;
2. 1st sentance, 1st paragraph, s/b can shoot up to or further;
3. 2nd sentence, 1st paragraph, s/b spray not spry, repeated later in same paragraph x2;
4. 6th sentence, 1st paragrah loose s/b lose;
5. 2nd paragraph, theirs s/b there's;
7. Potato Gun Diagram:
a) Cupling s/b Coupling;
b) cutt s/b cut;
c) text box, 1st line too many 'make' there my friend!
d) somthing s/b something;
e) seriously has one r;
8. 1st caption on tazer diagram, victom s/b victim;
9. 3rd caption on tazer diagram safty s/b safety;
10. 3rd caption on tazer diagram shoke s/b shock;
11. 4th caption on tazer diagram tellsyou s/b tells you;
12. key for wiring, purple, bults s/b bolts.
I hope this is of help, i have trouble with spelling and grammer but I believe all corrections are right and are in British English.
(I hope you are not offended)
Tubs xXx</strong><hr></blockquote>
great! :)
well the two news things were for display testing but everything helps
thank you
Hmm just what we need more small arms!
did you by chance sell the plans to the
afagans? Omars new secret weapon! :D