Review a site I am selling....

DJ SERVICE

though its not finished give me a quick comment or 2 whether you think it works for a DJ service. or anyother comments....
TIA.

btw domain name is on its way and day

Nice, only complaints are the big black space that hits you once you load up, and the long paragraphs in some sections.

Otherwise - I like.

yeah the black space is waiting for an intro much of the same that is going to be said in the audio intro.

What's "Illegal Digit Path"?

I think he should ask for a refund! :D

KIDDING!!

I actually like the changes you made since I saw it last. The sheet of music looks much nicer the way it is now!

Good job!

how much are you selling it for?

just wondering.

I got $400

for this site

http://www.pro-env.com

did it the way they wanted it.

It's okay.

However, I didn't like that siren noise when clicking on the Click Hear for audible intro.

That could be changed.

Either than that. It's an average website.

The siren thing is going to be changed to a audible intro much like what will be written on the main page.. its not there yet.

the illegal path is the Hit counter ready only when the domain name kicks in.

Deamon I did this one real cheap. its the first I did for someone else.

I charged only $300 cdn +45$ per update over the next few years and he expects at least 15 updates a year.

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Originally posted by DANIMAL
The siren thing is going to be changed to a audible intro much like what will be written on the main page.. its not there yet.

the illegal path is the Hit counter ready only when the domain name kicks in.

Deamon I did this one real cheap. its the first I did for someone else.

I charged only $300 cdn +45$ per update over the next few years and he expects at least 15 updates a year.

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ahh sweet.

The page I posted was a update, I was paid $200 before then I did a full update on the site, template and all, charging them $400, I must be cheap ehhe

still your warranty blows mine away :) mines a one time thing ehhe

Its not really a warrant Deamon. just an insurance to get paid .. he has nothing ... no files no passwords no nothing...I can can the site on him at any time.

so i am garanteed the job to do updates. I did not sell him the files.

I even changed the password on the domain controller....

He's real green and doesnt even care he actually loves the site. Its just what he wants.


:D

Looks good TWINDADZ....pocket the money and consider it a job well done.;)

well hello there twindadz long time no see. thanks btw

ahh werd but without peeps like that where else would we get our $$$ :D

Found a slight problem, I know its pickey but you asked for it

check the Logo at the top that says "music tailored to suit'

anyone see anything wrong with that?

It starts with double quotes and ends with a single quote.

Again, I know its pickey...:D

Also you wrote at the bottm of the page

COPY WRITE - 2002 www.danimalscave.com

should be

Copyright - 2002 www.danimalscave.com

thanks RD i knew of the second one but the quotation one will have to slide unless he notices it.

:D :D

I would add some "Swish" to the site to make it more compelling to the eye.
Other than that don't put much into it - I hope they are paying you well.

Cheers and Keep the Good Work,
Gabirel

I found the text areas to be in too big blocks... for instance the Who Are We paragraphs... too long, hard to read quickly. This guy wants to sell his services, it should be easier to read by breaking up the text a little into smaller paragraphs.

Also the long paragraph about why hire a dj centred on a column next to the services does not work well for skim reading why he should get hired... which after all is what alot of people want to do - read it quick, if they like what they see, they will go deaper.

I do like the forums idea, where guests of the bride and groom can make suggestions about the music and stuff... very good idea.

thanks for the replies everyone I will post the finished product when its is fully finished.

probably in a week or so.

all teh littel adjustments will be tweaked and such by then