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    Post DaemonProjects new layout again

    Tell me what you think about this new design, and tell me if there are any miss spelling words, broken links etc...


    <a href="http://www.daemonprojects.com/test1/" target="_blank">http://www.daemonprojects.com/test1/</a>

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    You need more Idea ??
    I have some simple Land mins wating to be made.
    Rest of the stuff Is for more WorLike enviromant when real armys are fighting

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    Hi there, I've been proof reading your site and have found the following errors:

    1. will is consistantly mis-spelled as well;
    2. 1st sentance, 1st paragraph, s/b can shoot up to or further;
    3. 2nd sentence, 1st paragraph, s/b spray not spry, repeated later in same paragraph x2;
    4. 6th sentence, 1st paragrah loose s/b lose;
    5. 2nd paragraph, theirs s/b there's;
    7. Potato Gun Diagram:
    a) Cupling s/b Coupling;
    b) cutt s/b cut;
    c) text box, 1st line too many 'make' there my friend!
    d) somthing s/b something;
    e) seriously has one r;
    8. 1st caption on tazer diagram, victom s/b victim;
    9. 3rd caption on tazer diagram safty s/b safety;
    10. 3rd caption on tazer diagram shoke s/b shock;
    11. 4th caption on tazer diagram tellsyou s/b tells you;
    12. key for wiring, purple, bults s/b bolts.

    I hope this is of help, i have trouble with spelling and grammer but I believe all corrections are right and are in British English.

    (I hope you are not offended)

    Tubs xXx

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    [quote]Originally posted by Tubs:
    <strong>Hi there, I've been proof reading your site and have found the following errors:

    1. will is consistantly mis-spelled as well;
    2. 1st sentance, 1st paragraph, s/b can shoot up to or further;
    3. 2nd sentence, 1st paragraph, s/b spray not spry, repeated later in same paragraph x2;
    4. 6th sentence, 1st paragrah loose s/b lose;
    5. 2nd paragraph, theirs s/b there's;
    7. Potato Gun Diagram:
    a) Cupling s/b Coupling;
    b) cutt s/b cut;
    c) text box, 1st line too many 'make' there my friend!
    d) somthing s/b something;
    e) seriously has one r;
    8. 1st caption on tazer diagram, victom s/b victim;
    9. 3rd caption on tazer diagram safty s/b safety;
    10. 3rd caption on tazer diagram shoke s/b shock;
    11. 4th caption on tazer diagram tellsyou s/b tells you;
    12. key for wiring, purple, bults s/b bolts.

    I hope this is of help, i have trouble with spelling and grammer but I believe all corrections are right and are in British English.

    (I hope you are not offended)

    Tubs xXx</strong><hr></blockquote>

    great!

    well the two news things were for display testing but everything helps

    thank you
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    Hmm just what we need more small arms!

    did you by chance sell the plans to the

    afagans? Omars new secret weapon!

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