Review a site I am selling....

[DANIMAL]

thanks RD i knew of the second one but the quotation one will have to slide unless he notices it.

[Gabriel]

I would add some "Swish" to the site to make it more compelling to the eye.
Other than that don't put much into it - I hope they are paying you well.

Cheers and Keep the Good Work,
Gabirel

[NooNoo]

I found the text areas to be in too big blocks... for instance the Who Are We paragraphs... too long, hard to read quickly. This guy wants to sell his services, it should be easier to read by breaking up the text a little into smaller paragraphs.

Also the long paragraph about why hire a dj centred on a column next to the services does not work well for skim reading why he should get hired... which after all is what alot of people want to do - read it quick, if they like what they see, they will go deaper.

I do like the forums idea, where guests of the bride and groom can make suggestions about the music and stuff... very good idea.

[DANIMAL]

thanks for the replies everyone I will post the finished product when its is fully finished.

probably in a week or so.

all teh littel adjustments will be tweaked and such by then